Ryan: *Walks In House*/ Ryan: Nice house/ Crystal: yeah yeah lets get started hehe/ Ryan: *Blushes*/ Crystal: *She pulls out a chair*/ Crystal: Come on sit sit hehe/ Ryan: wow thanks/ Crystal: i will be right back im going to bring a friend/ Crystal: *runs into kitchen*/ Ryan: What friend?/ ???: Ugh whos this person/ Crystal: hehe its a guest silly/ ???: A guest my ass/ Ryan: uhh i think i should get going now/ Crystal: no no its ok hes just angry sometimes/ Ryan: Well my name is ryan whats yours?/ James: The name is james/ Ryan: wait what the your telling me your the one i ment when you were fighting?!/ James: Hell yeah/ Ryan: Ha lets get started on the drinks!/ Ryan and his other friends had a good drink today/ Ryan: *Has A Dream*/Ryan: TAKE THIS MORON/ Guard 1: Oh s...................hit/ *Sling Pow*/ Ryan: Wakes Up Breathing Hard/ Crystal: Are You Alright?/ Ryan: Yea Just A Dream/ Crystal: Alright You Should Get Some Rest were going on a awesome adventure hehe/ Ryan: Adventure? .....alright i should get some rest then ha. THE NEXT MORNING/ Crystal: Come on guys get up get up breakfest!/ Ryan: Ughh/ Crystal: Morning Ryan And Morning James/ Ryan: *sits on table*/ James: Do i have too?/ Crystal: Yes you do so eat up!/ James: alright alright i will eat it/ Ryan: uhh you eat carrots for breakfest i dont get it.. THAT AFTERNOON/ Ryan: our adventure was a city?/ James: I know right/ Crystal: shut up you two your about to....../ Ryan: What the hell is that thing!/ James: IM NOT SURE BUT IM RUNNING!/ Crystal: YOU GUYS WERE RIGHT LETS GO!!!/ Dragon: RAWR!!!/Ryan: Quick in the forest *They ran to the forest then they splited up* Ryan: *still running* Guys?/ James And Crystal: GET US OUT OF HERE!!!!/ Priates: heheh we are taking you far far away from your dumb friend or should i say ryan heheh/ Crystal: what you guys want.../ Priate: i want you honey *touches face*/ James: hey back off bastard dont touch her/ Priates: GET RID OF HIM!/Crystal: i hope ryan finds us soon *sniff* sniff* END OF EP 6
Good story bro,but it was hard to track who is saying what. Maybe put the characters lines a little bit apart?
Yeah good idea because thats why i putted the / in middle of the lines when the characters are talking but you have a point sorry
