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My finished build! Feedback please :D

Discussion in 'Share Your Creations' started by SidStrafes_, Feb 26, 2015.

  1. ProbablySid_

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    So I finally finished this and I would like some feedback. :)

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  2. ProbablySid_

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    If you'd like to see it, just go to /warp mountainvillage
     
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  3. ironicmemexd

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    You've truly impressed me Sid, so this is what you've been working on for the past few months :D it looks epic, nice aethetics!

    Just some critical criticism though,

    •the trees look too organized, make it random(ish)!
    •most of the trees look like the same shape, make them unique!
    •there are a few bits of spherical shaped things in the ravine, but it still looks pretty natural!
    Otherwise, that's some banter right there :D
     
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  4. Aipa

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    Seems pretty good so far. Some suggestions:
    • Ground looks really random. The mixture of clay and dirt seems somewhat spotty to me.
    • As Karthnik said, the trees look too artificial
    Otherwise great job!
     
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  5. Mas281

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    Is this for Artisan or just for fun?
    • Place an Easter egg somewhere for the reviewer
    • Fix yo interiors
     
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